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		<title>By: mk akan</title>
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		<dc:creator>mk akan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 22 Feb 2010 22:49:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>i am guilty of stretching sentences for the obvious reason of making post lenghty.now i know i need to change that...thanks</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>i am guilty of stretching sentences for the obvious reason of making post lenghty.now i know i need to change that&#8230;thanks</p>
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		<title>By: Bodybuilding supplements</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bodybuilding supplements</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 19 Feb 2010 02:34:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nice tips. Thanks for sharing it, i may be writing my own article soon..</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nice tips. Thanks for sharing it, i may be writing my own article soon..</p>
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		<title>By: Will McNeice</title>
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		<dc:creator>Will McNeice</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Nov 2009 07:12:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Just wait till you start having to edit articles written in TXT SPK! Who needs vowels anyway?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just wait till you start having to edit articles written in TXT SPK! Who needs vowels anyway?</p>
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		<title>By: Thomas</title>
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		<dc:creator>Thomas</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Nov 2009 21:45:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I definitely agree with you, Slater.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I definitely agree with you, Slater.<br />
<span class="cluv"> Thomas&#180;s last blog ..<a href="http://anatomyofmelancholy.wordpress.com/2009/09/26/stamp-a-fiction/" rel="nofollow">Stamp — a fiction</a> <span class="heart_tip_box"><img class="heart_tip" alt="My ComLuv Profile" border="0" width="16" height="14" src="http://www.remarkable-communication.com/wp-content/plugins/commentluv/images/littleheart.gif"/></span></span></p>
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		<title>By: Slater</title>
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		<dc:creator>Slater</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Nov 2009 22:04:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thomas,

Great post, but I want to comment on one of your examples:

“He walked in the room, looked around, and put away his gun.”

I wonder if you meant &quot;He walked into the room.&quot; Walking in a room and walking into a room are two different things. The above structure with the simple preposition &quot;to&quot; implies that he was already inside the room when he started walking, but I believe the intended meaning is that there was no delay between his walking through the doorway (into, not in, the room) and looking around. The proper choice of the compound preposition &quot;into&quot; drives away that ambiguity.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thomas,</p>
<p>Great post, but I want to comment on one of your examples:</p>
<p>“He walked in the room, looked around, and put away his gun.”</p>
<p>I wonder if you meant &#8220;He walked into the room.&#8221; Walking in a room and walking into a room are two different things. The above structure with the simple preposition &#8220;to&#8221; implies that he was already inside the room when he started walking, but I believe the intended meaning is that there was no delay between his walking through the doorway (into, not in, the room) and looking around. The proper choice of the compound preposition &#8220;into&#8221; drives away that ambiguity.</p>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 24 Oct 2009 15:04:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I like the post, and I agree somewhat with Andrew , To be very truthful. Someone on Yahoo Answers referred me here and Thanks for sharing this valuable information.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I like the post, and I agree somewhat with Andrew , To be very truthful. Someone on Yahoo Answers referred me here and Thanks for sharing this valuable information.</p>
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		<title>By: Michael</title>
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		<dc:creator>Michael</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Sep 2009 02:43:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Excellent article.  I write a lot, and have several books and hundreds of articles under my belt, and your tips are very useful and handy.

Well posted!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent article.  I write a lot, and have several books and hundreds of articles under my belt, and your tips are very useful and handy.</p>
<p>Well posted!</p>
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		<dc:creator>Thing 5 &#8212; More good stuff &#124; Twain Weck</dc:creator>
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		<title>By: Mary Donnery</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mary Donnery</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 06 Jun 2009 21:17:27 +0000</pubDate>
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